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Undertale- Never Mess with a Child

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Undertale- Never Mess with a Child

Mettaton was helping Alphys be a hero.He'd set traps that Alphys would help Frisk escape.

However,much for Alphys's shock...Mettaton had a change of plans!

He told the whole truth to Frisk,and locked himself with her....he intended to kill Frisk for real and take her SOUL!

Frisk gasped,while Alphys told about the switch.However,Mettaton was just too strong!

"Sorry,darling.But there's no way you can win.You are not the star of this show...I am simply too strong for you." Mettaton smirked."Why not just accept defeat,hmm?Rejoice that your SOUL will be put to use on a noble cause." he added.

Frisk grunted."C-can't....many people...counting on me...!" she whined.

However,she then heard a voice in her head. "I....ad....oubles..."

"H-huh?" Frisk wondered,only to gasp as she heard the voice more clearly,and it said "It's sad to have troubles with a guy like this.I'll show you how to use your Determination!"

Mettaton raised an eyebrown,smirking,as he pointed his arm cannon to the child."Have you lost your mind?"

The kid smirked,grabbing a knife."Nah.I'm just showing Frisk how it's done.Give up,comedian.....even if you kill me I'll just reset and come back whole...and faster tham you on this little game."

Mettaton blinked."Well now,you sound different from before.This expression....."

"Heheheh......the differences don't stop there,comedian.Greetings....I am Chara.Allow me to show you what I can do when I get you with my DETERMINATION....you'll just become more LOVE for me!"

The tables have turned,and Frisk was despaired as she saw her body fight like this!She never wanted to kill anyone!She promised her friend,Undyne,and Toriel,her adoptive mother!

Mettaton showed all of his attacks.And he did put Chara down a few times,to be fair,though as Chara promised,she just reseted...and memorized each and every attack he tossed at her,becoming faster with each defeat!

Eventually,Mettaton fell to his knees."Gah!Not bad...for a child...."

Chara smirked."Sorry,comedian.Looks like your show was cancelled." she said,raising her knife!

Frisk couldn't let this happen!She didn't understand what was happening,but she did not want to have a death in her conscience!

At the peak of her despair,the world glowed white,as Frisk instinctively managed to reset to a point prior to Mettaton's betrayal of Alphys......

Frisk gasped."What happened....?!" she wondered,but she saw herself before Mettaton,on his computer form,as he was about to lock the door.

"YOU BLACKED OUT ON THE MIDDLE OF MY EXPLANATION.HOWEVER,I NOW NEED YOUR SOUL.IT WILL HELP ME GET TO THE SURFACE,AND STOP ASGORE FROM WAGING WAR AGAINST THE HUMANS AS WELL."

"No,no,I saw this before!I don't wanna fight.....someone,HELP ME!!!!" Frisk yelled.

That simple yell for help changed history....for Toriel had her Cellphone still,having recovered it from the Annoying Dog,and it picked Frisk's distressed yell for help!

Toriel was no stranger to magic,of course....and she knew her child was in danger!

Frisk tried to run away from Mettaton,ending up activating his switch during the confusion.But when there was nowhere to run,and it seemed history would repeat itself!

BOOOOM!The door was blasted open!

"Stay away from my child!" Toriel said,a fiery glare in her eyes!

"Well....who expected this plot twist?An unexpected guest.How did you get in here?" Mettaton asked,wide eyed in surprise.

"M....mommy...?!" Frisk gasped,but run to her,sobbing as she hugged Toriel.

Toriel's eyes narrowed.She could see Frisk was hurt,and that made her furious....."That is enough.Stand down and accept your punishment,or things will be worse..."

"Now,darling,you know I can't do that.I have my own reasons.Stardom,and stopping a war....sorry,I need her SOUL." Mettaton pointed out."Still,we can have a compromise?I could include you on my show if you just cooperate..."

"....." Toriel sighed lightly,even her patience had limits."....So be it.Now,remember,I gave you a chance."

The ensuing fight was different from the fight Frisk went through before.Fueled by a motherly worry,Toriel overpowered Mettaton,but SPARED him...for now!

"Ouch,ouch,ouch,you could have been a little less rough,now couldn't you?" Mettaton asked.

Toriel shook her head."Don't complain just yet.Save your complaints for after your punishment...."

"Punishment?Of what sort...?" Mettaton wondered.

"You'll know soon enough." Toriel said.

That "soon enough" came to pass....Toriel let Alphys fix Mettaton.

When Frisk was healed,she continued in her quest.In the end,all monsters were saved,and free to leave the Underground...

...but before that.....

Mettaton was confused as he was taken to his studio,where he makes his programs that the whole Underground watch.But he was in for a shock!

Alphys helped Toriel turn the cameras on(the Queen had no idea how to use those properly).

"Now,Mettaton.You attacked a innocent child.And while I can empathyse with you wanting to end a war before it starts,your main reason was Stardom,and that is not a good reason at all.A childish behavior deserves a childish punishment.One that ALL monsters will witness." Toriel said.

"N-now,Darling,there's no reason for us to go overboard here...." Mettaton groaned.

"You went overboard when you attacked Frisk!" Toriel scolded,turning him over her lap.

Mettaton gasped."W-wait,what?N-now,this isn't this kinda show..." he tried,as his bottom was bared.

"Now it is.A show about discipline." Toriel said,landing the first spank.

"OWW!C-c'mon,I am not that young..." Mettaton whined.

"One more reason for you to know better." Toriel said,as she kept spanking.

The monsters watching the program couldn't believe their eyes! Toriel...was quite strict,it seemed!

Mettaton,blushing,didn't believe it himself!He was over someone's lap,getting his butt spanked....bad enough...

....but also being watched by the whole Underground while on this embarassing position!

"Oww!Ouch!Owww!Aww,please!There's no need for this!" Mettaton whined.

"If you believe that,you truly didn't learn your lesson yet." Toriel said,as she alternated cheeks.

Mettaton yelped,winced,squirmed. But the spanks kept coming!It stung so very much!

"OUCH!Oh,pleaseee!I,have learned!I have learned!" he pleaded.

But Toriel wanted to be sure of it!

She heat up her hand as she spanked!

"OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!" Mettaton yelped,it hurt so much!He soon teared up!

SPANK!SPANK!SPANKSPANKSPAAAAAAAAAAAAANK!

"Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!Please,I promise it will not happen agaaaaaaaaaain!"

"Then what have you learned?" Toriel asked,as she spanked all over the butt.

"Waaaahh!Not to hurt childreeen!"

"Good,or else...?" she asked,spanking the sitspots.

"WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!I'll be spaaaaaaaaaaaaaaankeeeeed!"

Harder ones to the sitspots,the audience actually winced!

But Mettaton's punishment was not over,for Toriel had him stay on the corner with his red butt facing the camera,for ten whole minutes!

Once it was over,she hugged the crying Robot.

"I'm sorry....I'm sorry..." Metatton cried.

"I am glad to hear it.But it's not to me you should be sorry." Toriel gently said.

"You're right...I'll apologise to Frisk later.Just...not a rerun of this episode." Mettaton pleaded.

"If you behave." Toriel said,as she conforted him...not telling Mettaton she gave Alphys some hints on how to keep him disciplined!

Mettaton apologised to Frisk.And all was well...but,when he misbehaved from then on,he found out that superstars also earn red butts at times!

THE END
For my friend, android17sexyass

Mettaton tried to take Frisk's Soul.But he didn't count with one thing....

.....An worried mother!
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Fullmetal224's avatar
Need so many more of these~ <3